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There are many ways to write a story. Marcel Proust stayed in bed year after year and wrote and wrote and never quite finished his Remembrance of Things Past. It is said that Nobel laureate Pär Lagerkvist, who wrote Barabbas, could spend a week rewriting and polishing one single sentence. In order to make a living, F. Scott Fitzgerald “tore off” short stories for the slick market, but at the same time he took his time when he wrote The Great Gatsby and other novels. He was even more careful when he plotted and structured The Last Tycoon and spent the last years of his life on the draft that was unfinished when he died in 1940.
Similarly, Edmond Hamilton plotted and structured his stories before he wrote them. Hamilton met Leigh Brackett in 1940 and he was least to say impressed by stories like “The Jewel of Bas” and “The Veil of Astellar.” But while Hamilton knew what he was going to write when he sat down by his typewriter, Brackett had no idea whatsoever of the direction her stories would take when she sat down at hers.
In his introduction to The Best of Leigh Brackett (Ballantine, 1977) Hamilton wrote: “We found, when we first began working together, that we had quite different ways of doing a story. I was used to writing a synopsis of the plot first, and then working from that. To my astonishment, when Leigh was working on a story and I asked her, ‘Where is your plot?’ she answered ‘There isn’t any ... I just start writing the first page and let it grow.’ I exclaimed, ‘That is a devil of a way to write a story!’ But for her, it seemed to work fine.”
Over the years the two affected each other’s writing. Leigh Brackett learned plotting from her husband. Even though he plotted his stories before he wrote them, he had nevertheless been a hack writer all the way from “The Monster-God of Mamurth,” published in Weird Tales, August 1926. Under the influence of his wife, he stopped using his typewriter as a machine gun. He no longer wrote in a hurry and took an interest in carefully forming his sentences.
When Startling Stories asked Hamilton, in 1950, to revive Captain Future for a series of short stories, he was busy working on other assignments. He wrote the first story “The Return of Captain Future.” Then he wrote the synopses for the other stories. But when I visited them, I was told that it was actually Leigh Brackett who wrote them under his guidance using the “pen name” Edmond Hamilton.
In 1964 it was the other way around, when Hamilton expanded Leigh’s short story “Queen of the Martian Catacombs” into “The Secret of Sinharat” and “Black Amazon of Mars” into “The People of the Talisman.” Both stories were originally penned in the 1940’s.
This matrimonial co-operation went even deeper than that. With “Stark and the Star Kings” they pooled their resources and brought together their heroes Eric John Stark and John Gordon. The story was not published until 2005 in the collection Stark and the Star Kings (Haffner Press Royal Oak, Michigan).
In his introduction to Martian Quest: The Early Brackett (Haffner Press 2002), Michael Moorcock points out that her stories appeared “in what I believe were the superior pulps, containing more vivid and often more lasting fiction than the admired Astounding and F&SF; which were considered more prestigious in their day. I preferred the pictures in Fantastic, particularly when they were by Finlay. With Weird Tales and Campbell’s excellent Unknown, for me Planet Stories, Thrilling Wonder Stories and Startling Stories all contained more idiosyncratic writing, more stylish innovation, than an entire run of the more respectable sf magazines.”
Michael Moorcock’s remark is underlined by the fact that Ray Bradbury’s novel The Martian Chronicles was originally published in the form of short stories in the down-market pulp magazine Planet Stories. Bradbury-specialist Jerry Weist, who wrote Bradbury: an Illustrated Life (William Morrow, 2002) thinks that The Martian Chronicles is THE science fiction book that will survive when other science fiction stories are forgotten.
And I would like to add that it seems to me that The Martian Chronicles, together with the ultimate space opera novel, Alfred Bester’s ingenious paraphrase of Monte Cristo, The Stars My Destination (Tiger! Tiger!) is one of two science fiction masterpieces of the English language literature of the past century. Both are unique and incomparable, without parallel.
Anyway, when Leigh Brackett got an opportunity to defend the “lousy” pulp magazine and the appalling space opera in her introduction to The Best of Planet Stories # 1 (Ballantine Books, 1975), she unburdened her heart in a way that showed commitment to the hilt:
“Planet, unashamedly, published ‘space opera’. Space opera, as every reader doubtless knows, is a pejorative term often applied to a story that has an element of adventure. Over the decades, brilliant and talented new writers appear, receiving great acclaim, and each and every one of them can be expected to write at least one article stating flatly that the day of space opera is over and done, thank goodness, and that henceforward these crude tales of interplanetary nonsense will be replaced by whatever type of story that writer happens to favor — closet dramas, psychological dramas, sex dramas, etc., but by God important dramas, containing nothing but Big Thinks. Ten years later, the writer in question may or may not still be around, but the space opera can be found right where it always was, sturdily driving its dark trade in heroes.”
And she goes on, giving a reason for her strong opinion, showing that it has not appeared out of thin air:
“The tale of adventure — of great courage and daring, of battle against the forces of darkness and the unknown — has been with the human race since it first learned to talk. It began as a part of the primitive survival technique, interwoven with magic and ritual, to explain and propitiate the vast forces of nature with which man could not cope in any other fashion. The tales grew into religions. They became myth and legend. They became the Mabinogion and the Ulster Cycle and the Voluspa. They became Arthur and Robin Hood, and Tarzan of the Apes. The so-called space opera is the folk-tale, the hero-tale, of our particular niche in history.”
Science fiction at its very best is the genre that by definition can be said to be at least next to existential by nature. Here the imagination of life and death and time and space and past and future are intertwined in a way you will not generally find within mainstream or mystery or any other literary genre for that matter.
And if anything, Leigh Brackett is an existential writer. An exquisite and beautiful tale like “The Veil of Astellar,” perhaps the most sparkling ruby in her diadem of precious gems, creates a numbing sense of powerlessness, which seems to be the unfathomable tragedy of human fate. It is a story where the spirit of painful human self-sacrifice in a most strange context is explored. The “hero” of the story knows that he has gone beyond humanity and can’t turn back:
Maybe prayer doesn’t matter. Maybe there’s nothing beyond death but oblivion. I hope so! If I could only stop being, stop thinking, stop remembering. I hope to all the gods of the universe that death is the end. But I don’t know, and I’m afraid. Afraid. Judas-Judas-Judas! I betrayed two worlds, and there couldn’t be a hell deeper than the one I live in now. And still I am afraid. Why? Why should I care what happens to me?
Not exactly the kind of stuff you expect from a pulp magazine. Brackett wrote that the stories in Planet Stories were “written to be entertaining, to be exciting, to impart to the reader some of the pleasure we had in writing them.” This abruptly reminds me of what Julian Symons wrote about stories published in the British Strand Magazine: “Most of them were written with no more serious purpose than to occupy a reader’s attention for an hour; yet the best do more than that, leaving echoes in the mind.”
“The Veil of Astellar” leaves echoes in my mind.
Impressed by the way of life of the Amish people in Ohio, Leigh Brackett sat down in 1955 and wrote a story that has been called one of the finest dystopies written in modern time. Her idea was that since the Amish people live in a simple way in the midst of modern society, they would be better equipped than others to survive in a world destroyed by a nuclear catastrophe. The result was The Long Tomorrow, a novel that leads to an unpredictable end, actually an anticlimax, but unlike many other stories by Brackett the sense of implied existential fear and meaninglessness is not catching.
She got fine reviews. H.H. Holmes (a.k.a. no less than Anthony Boucher) wrote: “You may think you are tired of prophecies of the decay of civilization after a destructive A-war; but let me assure you that Leigh Brackett has taken this subject and made it sparkling fresh by the warmth and perception of her writing.” But honestly, I cannot agree with the reviewer in The New York Times, who found it not only “a great work of science fiction”, which it is, but also “by far Leigh Brackett’s best novel...”
With all due deference to The Long Tomorrow, The Sword of Rhiannon (originally published as “Sea-Kings of Mars” in Thrilling Wonder Stories, June 1949) is a far better novel story-wise, structure-wise, language-wise and plot-wise. In both stories Brackett describes societies that have gone down the drain, but in the latter story that spent society is used as a framework for the same society at its former height of existence, when it was teeming with life and deeds. Brackett does it in a way that strictly speaking is not new. But her way of twisting the given formula makes it completely different from other works using a similar framework. Her way of conjuring up a glorious past in contrast to a dried-up present is devastating. It is a sad hero tale that makes you think. If you are the least sensitive, this story too leaves echoes in your mind. And not to forget, it is a most entertaining story.
The hero of that masterpiece is Leigh Brackett’s favorite male character. In a way, he was originally cast in that first half of “Lorelei of the Red Mist” and she developed him through a series of short stories and novels into the archetypal Brackett hero. He became Eric John Stark of many stories taking place on Venus and Mars.
With the space exploration revealing that Venus and Mars are far removed from the fantasies of planet romances, Stark ultimately left our solar system and wound up on Skaith, the dying planet of a Ginger Star. The result was the three volumes of The Book of Skaith, pure Brackett but not really reaching the heights of The Sword of Rhiannon, where Stark, like King Arthur, unfastens the sword and turns time upside down in an enlightening though gloomy comparative way.
With Follow the Free Wind (1963), Brackett did for the western story what she did for the Hawks/Wayne co-operation. It is a Western based on the life of James Beckworth. The novel won her “The Spur Award” from Western Writers of America. It is a captivating novel from the very beginning and when reading it, the story seems to have been written in one single burst of creativity. It once more shows the literary diversity of this woman talented far beyond mere talent. (To mention a curiosity, she was the ghostwriter behind George Sanders’ novel Stranger at Home.)
John Clute is absolutely right when he states that Leigh Brackett “was a marked influence upon the next generation of writers.” In many respects, she was a writer’s writer from the very beginning. Ray Bradbury has told us that she was his best loving friend and teacher and he her best loving friend and student.
For three years, 1941 to 1944, they met every Sunday at Muscle Beach in Santa Monica. “I would bring along a new short story (dreadful) and she would let me see one of her Planet novel chapters (beautiful) and I would praise hers and she would kick hell out of me and I’d go home and rewrite my imitation of Leigh Brackett.”
Marion Zimmer Bradley talks about how influenced she was by her. It has been said that E. C. Tubb could quote Brackett by heart. Michael Moorcock has said that Brackett and not Moorcock “should really be collecting the Elric royalties.” Reason: “Anyone who thinks they’re pinching one of my ideas is probably pinching one of hers.” Moorcock also thinks that with “Catherine Moore, Judith Merril and Cele Goldsmith, Leigh Brackett is one of the true godmothers of the New Wave.” He even makes the statement that Brackett antedated cyberpunk by fifty years! Well, well. It may be a little bit difficult to digest, but perhaps Moorcock knows something, I can’t say.
The list of writers paying tribute to her includes many other names like Philip José Farmer and Andre Norton to mention a few. Furthermore, she has been favorably compared to Graham Greene, James M. Cain, Dashiell Hammett, Raymond Chandler, Edgar Rice Burroughs. And mystery writer Michael Connelly “blames” her for saving him from a life in construction work through her screen adaptation of Chandler’s The Long Goodbye.
At the end of her life, Leigh Brackett’s tryst with space opera came full circle at the same time as she was given another opportunity to make her point in defending her beloved genre. She was assigned to write the screen-script for the second Star Wars movie, Episode Five, The Empire Strikes Back, based on George Lucas’ idea, thus combining her skill at space opera with her skill as a scriptwriter.
With Star Wars (1977), George Lucas had launched the first believable space opera movie. Thanks to technological breakthrough, the laughable attempts in the past (remember Flash Gordon and similar efforts?) were surpassed and the space opera triumphed on the silver screen. Lucas was inspired by everything from Buck Rogers on, and he combined the many loose ends into a reasonably good space adventure where some of the best qualities of the genre were emphasized. And it all ended like an ancient Greek tragedy with an Oedipal twist.
Leigh Brackett was well aware of the rules when assigned a job within the movie- and TV-industries. “If you want to do something on your own, fine,” she told me. “Write a book or try to sell one of your own ideas and stories and pilots, but in the industry, when you get an assignment and work for other people, you have to adjust and rewrite and/or be rewritten over and over and over again. And you know that when it comes to the sticking-point, there is no guarantee that the movie or the TV-play will ever be produced at all.”
In 1977, she wrote the first draft for Star Wars: Episode Five, the Empire Strikes Back, delivered it to the 20th Century Fox studios and — died! The day before she died in 1978 she called Ray Bradbury and told him laughingly that her doctor “had injected a huge overdose of painkilling drugs so that she would die joyfully.”
Posthumously, she was awarded a Hugo for her Star Wars script. As Jerry Weist puts it: “Jedi Master Yoda is pure Brackett.” Well, Lawrence Kasdan also had a finger in George Lucas’ pie. Anyhow, it is not an exaggeration to state that of all the six Star Wars movies, The Empire Strikes Back is by far the best one. Who knows? Maybe we can credit that to Leigh Brackett?
I am quite sure that the feeling Mr Darcy gives utterance to when he, in a first attempt, proposes to Miss Elizabeth Bennet in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, that the same feeling is shared by some of us readers when it comes to Leigh Brackett’s best stories:
We ardently admire and love them!
Postscript: Haffner Press is planning to publish Leigh Brackett’s remaining short stories.
Copyright © 2007 by Bertil Falk